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Iain Jolley wrote:

Well here is my item. after reading it it could have been written better.

I was trying to be creative but it might have come across as to silly.

But here it is anyways.

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You know what is funny, we talked about this one a TON.

Your item was the main place we discussed the idea of humorus items. I dont know if you were trying to be silly or not. We thought you were.

Believe it or not, we decided you didnt go FAR enough. I mean, that name got us all lubed up for some whacky fun.

Yeah, here is what I wrote:

"If you are going to make a bad item, it better be really bad. I expected some really bad references to cheesy dance crap and performance art junk. +1 to hit him isnt good enough. If it is going to be bad, make it really crazy bad. Reject for not being crappy enough. The name is great though... Imagine what that guy who writes the Order of the Stick could do with this idea. The mind boggles."

Wow thanks for that....;)

I wanted some humor in it but i wish i had gone that extra step now...

You reply was much appreciated and I thank you guys for all the hard work you did.

Iain

Well here is my item. after reading it it could have been written better.
I was trying to be creative but it might have come across as to silly.

But here it is anyways.