|James Sutter Contributor|
|Chris A Jackson Contributor|
I'm with tremor3258... I'd be makin' some noises, though they'd probably be inarticulate...
Looking forward to finding out how he's going to get out of this... I'm enjoying the story a lot!
A couple of words caught me off guard. "screen" for seeing the map in his mind's eye tweaked me the wrong way, and "faux-soie" sounded to colloquial.
I also noted that a few thieving tricks were skipped over, like traversing the alley with the grapple and line. Probably due to the length requirement of the piece... but still, I love those details... just me.