
Howard Andrew Jones Contributor |

Excellent work Howard - really, really good.
~Dean
I'm glad you're enjoying it, Dean.
I had to write this one in a white-heat while working on a deadline to a sequel for my other novel. Usually I ponder a little more as I go, but this one seemed to want to write itself, which was a good thing, given the looming deadline.

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Love the story so far, as I mention in the main PofS posting, love how you portrayed Valynn in this story as the "rookie" party member.
Great set of characters (again this Pathfinder Tales book is the one I've most can relate to as far as a gamer).
Love the setting, mood for this chapter. Love reading about the undead & your story really makes them come alive (so to speak of course, ha ha).
Can't wait till for the next Chapter. Also love the artwork of the various characters. Pictured Arcil a bit different when I first seen this pic but after finishing PofS, the artwork fits the character.
RM

Howard Andrew Jones Contributor |

Love the story so far, as I mention in the main PofS posting, love how you portrayed Valynn in this story as the "rookie" party member.
Great set of characters (again this Pathfinder Tales book is the one I've most can relate to as far as a gamer).
Love the setting, mood for this chapter. Love reading about the undead & your story really makes them come alive (so to speak of course, ha ha).
Can't wait till for the next Chapter. Also love the artwork of the various characters. Pictured Arcil a bit different when I first seen this pic but after finishing PofS, the artwork fits the character.
RM
Thanks, Haldir! My first thought was to write a sequel to PofS, but I was afraid that would give any number of things away, so a prequel seemed a better bet. And it enabled me to show Stelan in his glory days, and Vallyn back when HE was the young whippersnapper.
I'm pretty jazzed about the illustrations myself.