Aw, too bad! You're always welcome in the bonus slot. My sister and I actually had an idea for a later chapter in which that inquisitor might fit nicely.
Wow, that's a lot of applicants. I am definitely leaning heavily toward the two concepts you liked more out of mine.
By the way, for what it's worth, my sister's favorite concepts were the dwarf and the gnome. :P
Dang it KC, you broke my streak! :(
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About the Quillick, here is a link to a drawing I did of one.
Quillick Warrior(Female)
The male doesn't have the colored frills like the female.
The weapon is a special underwater axe/spear. Similar to a halberd.
Wow, looks very cool!
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In addition to the kindercloak, I'd also like to submit a super normal humanoid character.
Glendos Vialli is a dwarven unchained monk who's lived in Barlily for most of her life, but never felt at home because of fey associations. She was trained by a monk who turned out to be fey, and since he beat up some children (ostensibly for her sake) and then fled town, she wants to find him again and make him answer for his crime. She also fishes with her bare hands, and hopes to someday catch one of the unusual aquatic creatures she's seen in the Styx. Doc link.
Would you allow this 3pp? Dragonrider If so, I have something for you.
Working on two more
William here, this is the alias for my Quillick, I couldn't find a better alias picture :P
Based on first impressions, the dragonrider seems pretty powerful. We might need to make some changes if you get accepted—just a warning.
Thats fine, I probably wouldn't pick the gold dragon as its clearly the most powerful and a fair portion of its strength comes from the dragon itself. (as to be expected)
Changes I would consider would be taking away the Good Reflex or Will save, lowering the HD/BAB, and reducing the abilities/sizes of the dragons themselves. Comparing it to other pet classes (including the sky stalker) and other martial classes, the dragonrider definitely has the edge as-is.
True, though the PC himself doesn't get much in the way of other boosts. PM what you would want to change. I'd say keeping the fort/will saves as good makes sense RP wise due to being bonded with a dragon, but thats all your call. I'll PM you some thoughts on how I would go about it.
I'd rather steer clear of explicit rules changes on that front for now, unless anything's a dealbreaker for you. All I really need is an idea of the character.
Here is the Dragon Rider for you too look over, let me know if the back story would be in conflict with any ideas you had about the place. As of now, its straight up no changes to the numbers.
updated with class, items level and skills.
GM Panic here
next PC, is a Drow, cus I wanted to see what one was like as a cleric.
GM panic again, this is
Lady Naliea Inceene Lorenzz
I am still working on her, race wise.
GM panic again, this is
Lady Naliea Inceene Lorenzz
I am still working on her, race wise.
Done she is an outsider who becomes a monster race. A Snaked lady
Pretty daunting having to pick from this lineup...
Why yes, I think I've heard of this, Guh-nasty Guh-norc character.
KC,
I came up with another idea for a character...
It might have been created by someone else already..not sure and can not remember if they did.
I was thinking of a Wyrwood Wizard that has a human/elf as it's familiar. Kind of like Master Blaster from beyond thunder dome....
I've never seen Beyond Thunder Dome. Could you explain the premise of this character?
A tiny man rides in a harness on the back of a large man...
The Tiny man is the brains and the Tall man is the muscle...
So the Wyrwoond would be the small person being carried by the large familiar.
I was picturing a human type with a small basket/throne/chair that was on the back or should of the human. The Human would be the one carrying him around and riding the horse etc.
I will PM you a picture of the character from the movie.
As a general reminder to everyone, I'm really not interested in wrangling third-party classes and content. Third-party classes tend to be messy, with the exceptions of a few noteworthy publishers, and it's a lot of work to review them to see if they can work. Just because there's freedom of choice with races doesn't mean the same applies to everything in the system.
Path of War is pretty good, I guess.
If you really have an idea you love that hinges on some third-party content, I'll consider it. Make sure it is something you love.
Oh, legit I do :3. I also love the idea of the machine-smith, but I thought maybe the one I submitted would fit better with the world.
Honestly the sky stalker ranger I would have submitted background was pretty much a rip off of this one, with a few minor changes obviously.
A tiny man rides in a harness on the back of a large man...
The Tiny man is the brains and the Tall man is the muscle...
So the Wyrwoond would be the small person being carried by the large familiar.
I was picturing a human type with a small basket/throne/chair that was on the back or should of the human. The Human would be the one carrying him around and riding the horse etc.
I will PM you a picture of the character from the movie.
Sounds like you could accomplish this with a sort of summoner, actually, or even a devolutionist druid. But what do you think would suit this best? Familiars aren't really supposed to serve as "muscle".
I'm not sure if you saw my previous post regarding the Origami Master Archetype. Here it is
and it's mother thread.
Agostina so far...with personality and background info incoming.
I did, and it looks pretty cool! It's a pretty busy archetype, but you could definitely incorporate a version of it, at the very least. I think the overall archetype would work, too, it's just that I can't be sure without really taking time to analyze it.
Also, thelizardwizard's and my post are switching back and forth and it's kind of terrifying. We're talking ninja telefrag, here.
I did, and it looks pretty cool! It's a pretty busy archetype, but you could definitely incorporate a version of it, at the very least. I think the overall archetype would work, too, it's just that I can't be sure without really taking time to analyze it.
Ok, cool! I just wanted your go ahead for the mechanics. It's definitely a very ROBUST archetype. I wouldn't mind any variation of it, I'm honestly using it for the summon monster ability and how amazing the theme is represented. The eidolon is almost tertiary to the concept I had in mind. I just wanted to double check because you mentioned your apprehension of 3rd party/custom content.
I thought I was imagining the post switching! I'm glad alone in my craziness. I wonder if anyone else saw...
Going to change my Drow to an investigator really like the idea of and underdark kind of gum shoe pc.
Gm did anyone ask about guns in your setting
Someone did ask about guns, and it's outlined in the document:
Gunslingers are restricted to Early Firearms, and will seem every bit as strange and anomalous to the locals as mind flayers or dvati. That gun ain't from around here, partner.
Thanks for letting me know GM, will drop the gun idea, seems a bit out there for this setting.
Aw, too bad! You're always welcome in the bonus slot. My sister and I actually had an idea for a later chapter in which that inquisitor might fit nicely.
With your permission Kobold Cleaver, I believe I have come to peace with my Trow inquisitor and would like to reenter him for consideration.
I am focusing less on what was the problem for me. And I am focusing on the chaotic nature of the fey and the strangeness of this particular breed and character. Though he will remain an inquisitor of the Unseelie court and I will have some description of what that means.
Also, I am losing the wings, though that was one of the things that drew me to creating my own race; this race are better off without them.
I would like to replace the Racial trait "flight" @ 4 race points with "sky Sentinal" @ 3 points and "weapon familiarity" twice @ 2 points for four weapons: light hammers, warhammers, earthbreaker and Lucerne hammer. which will make it a 15 point spend.
If this is ok, please let me know.
Hey GM_Panic, when are we sailing the Mediterranean again?
I'm mostly not commenting on races unless there's a problem. It looks good! Interested to see what sort of character you come up with with it.
That's with stuff like favored class bonus and eclectic, right?
Can you clarify what you mean? I'm not familiar with those rules.
Okay, I think I've found what you meant (it was tricky because those abilities don't technically grant skill points). Yes, we can use those rules. You're making a significant investment to get that good at those skills.
I think if you're willing to invest that much into your skills, some extra skill points are fine. It's not like the fighter is in danger of becoming the most powerful class in the game. And you make sacrifices to get these benefits. The Weapon Training sacrifice is actually pretty brutal, since Weapon Training is one of the best abilities the standard fighter gets. If the final cut ends up including another "skill monkey" character, like a rogue, there might be a need for some niche protection, but that can be resolved by player choice as much as by game balancing.
Actually, reviewing this, you may be right. I'd probably want to limit the skill intake in some ways—perhaps by removing access to the feat, or decreasing the number of times you could take the skill-related options. Fighters get 4 bonus skill points in this game, after all. That's something to consider for later.
Hey GM_Panic, when are we sailing the Mediterranean again?
haha that was a fun game, don't know work wise I am doing so much, To biz going and teaching as well. Also writing so work work.
GM panic again, this is
Lady Naliea Inceene Lorenzz
I am still working on her, race wise.
Image here, I went another way, is becomes a monster. See image.
Would you be opposed to allowing Background skills? I'd love to add more flavor to my character but my skill points are divided. I have points in craft origami and want some in singing or lore mythology regarding my characters culture but currently can't afford it.