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... given her backstroy she has to have aristocrat as
favored class, since that is what she should have started out as, but i can't make hp bonus work out if it is aristocrat.
There's no rule to say that the first class you take, at level 1, has to be your favoured class... or even that you ever have to take any levels in your favoured class, if you don't want to... it's just that most PCs will tend to take whatever class they have at first level as their favoured class (but not all PCs - for example, a character taking Fighter at first level, but planning on then taking 5 levels of Wizard and progressing into the Eldritch Knight Prestige Class is more likely to take Wizard as his favoured class, even though he's not starting out as a Wizard).
Can't help you with the Dust Coven statblocks comparisons from my turnover, as they were significantly developed, but the original fire foot powder should help you out.
FIRE FOOT POWDER
Aura faint necromancy; CL 5th
Slot —; Price 500 gp; Weight —
Description
This bright red powder contains a mixture of rare herbs and black salt. One sachet contains enough powder to spread in a 5 ft. square, usually around doorways, and requires a DC 18 Perception check to notice. The first creature to enter the powdered square must succeed on a DC 13 Fortitude save or immediately fall prone, unable to crawl more than 5 ft. per round as their feet bloat and the skin splits in unbearable pain. The effects of this powder last for 5 rounds or until a cure spell is applied to the victim.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, inflict moderate wounds; Cost 250 gp
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Phethean Klexius p. 38
Ac off says +4 armor in mods, I think it assumes mage armor has be cast but the is no "* Already Cast" by the spell.
He ought to have only 4 0-level spells. Dancing Lights (an evocation spell), ought to take up two of those slots.
He ought to have 5 1-level spells. He only shows 4 prepared spells. This might be due to the mage armor already cast?ranks = 28 = 24 class +4 race
used = 29used more than i have and spellcraft still not +13
plus I had to give Knowledge (arcana) 6 ranks to get to +13 but he has only 4 HDAppraise +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Craft (alchemy) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Intimidate +4 = +4 ranks, +0 Cha
Knowledge (arcana) +13 = +6 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (dungeoneering) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (engineering) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (geography) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (history) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (local) +11 = +4 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (nature) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (nobility) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (planes) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (religion) +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Linguistics +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Int, +3 class skill
Perception +5 = +4 ranks, +1 Wis
Spellcraft +4 = +0 ranks, +4 Int
<Raise thread>
I know I'm late to the party here but I'm just now getting around to looking through this book. Everything chopswil has said here about Phethean Klexius is accurate. He's also missing mention of this blinding ray spell-like ability he gets for being an illusionist.
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Yrure’tugala p. 27
all saves seem to be off by 1
for exmple
WillMod = ClassMod + RaceMod + WisMod + cha mod Unholy Resilience
12 = 4 + 1 + 3 +4, SB says 13...
skill points = 60 = 25 class + 30 race + 5 favored
used = 63spent more than I have and Swim still isn't +7
Acrobatics +10 = +11 ranks, +1 Dex, +3 class skill, -5 Armor Check Penalty
Climb +15 = +1 ranks, +8 Str, +3 class skill, +8 extra mods, -5 Armor Check Penalty
Craft (armor) +7 = +1 ranks, +3 Int, +3 class skill
Craft (weapons) +7 = +1 ranks, +3 Int, +3 class skill
Diplomacy +8 = +4 ranks, +4 Cha
Disguise +10 = +3 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Handle Animal +8 = +1 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Intimidate +26 = +11 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill, +8 extra mods
Knowledge (nobility) +7 = +4 ranks, +3 Int
Knowledge (religion) +7 = +1 ranks, +3 Int, +3 class skill
Perception +16 = +10 ranks, +3 Wis, +3 class skill
Profession (gladiator) +7 = +1 ranks, +3 Wis, +3 class skill
Profession (torturer) +7 = +1 ranks, +3 Wis, +3 class skill
Sense Motive +10 = +4 ranks, +3 Wis, +3 class skill
Stealth +6 = +11 ranks, +1 Dex, +3 class skill, -4 extra mods, -5 Armor Check Penalty
Swim +3 = +0 ranks, +8 Str, -5 Armor Check Penalty
Saves are fine. The 2 HD he gains for being awakened raises his animal/magical beast HD from 4 to 6, increasing race mod and all saves by +1.
The skills are messed up, but what I think happened is they treated Diplomacy and Knowledge (nobility) as class skills, when those are class skills for the paladin, not the antipaladin. Reducing each by 3 fixes the skills.
EDIT: Additionally the following is wrong with his stat-block:
>>> Because the base attack bonus is incorrect (and it is, because an awakened animal doesn't get a magical beast's d10 HD or BAB progression), the melee and ranged attack values are off, and his attack with his weapon has 3 iterative attacks when it should only have 2. So, in addition to lowering CMB and CMD by 2, reduce all attack bonuses by 2 and remove the last iterative attack with his +1 guisarme.
>>> Change the line for "Paladin Spell-Like Abilities" to "Antipaladin Spell-Like Abilities".
>>> Change his spell-like ability from "detect evil" to "detect good".
>>> Change his line for "Paladin Spells Prepared" to "Antipaladin Spells Prepared".
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Pg. 42 - Azrikalis
In addition to the errors Chopswil found, there are a few others:
>>> AC and flat-footed AC should both be reduced by 1, since Azrikalis is wearing Tiny armor. According to page 153 of the Core Rulebook, specifically the footnote beneath Table 6-8: Armor for Unusual Creatures, armor made for Tiny and smaller creatures has half the armor bonus it typically has. So +1 leather armor made for a Tiny creature gives a +2 AC bonus instead of +3.
>>> In SQ, change trapfinding's bonus from "+2" to "+3".
>>> In the poison stats, change the save DC from "13" to "14". This accounts for his higher Con bonus than a standard quasit, and the quasit's +2 racial bonus.
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Pg. 43 Lamya Nilawi
Lamya's saves line doesn't include her Jackal Heritage feat. Change "+2 vs. enchantments" to "+2 vs. enchantments, +2 vs. mind-affecting (stacks)". Note that ALL enchantment spells and effects are also mind-affecting effects. so these will naturally stack together to create a +4 vs. mind-affecting effects, and a +2 vs. mind-affecting effects that aren't enchantment effects.
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Lerwynn Skathos p. 61
skill points = 105 = 104 class + 1 favored class
used = 105i've used up my points but Acrobatics, Climb, ,Sense Motive, Sleight of Hand, Stealth, Swim
and Use Magic Device are not what the SB says
Diploamcy and perform(sing) have 14 ranks, only 13 HDAcrobatics +4 = +0 ranks, +2 Dex, +2 extra mods
Bluff +20 = +13 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Climb +3 = +0 ranks, +1 Str, +2 extra mods
Diplomacy +21 = +14 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Disguise +14 = +7 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Fly +3 = +0 ranks, +2 Dex, +2 extra mods
Knowledge (history) +18 = +7 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill, +6 extra mods
Knowledge (local) +18 = +7 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill, +6 extra mods
Knowledge (nobility) +18 = +7 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill, +6 extra mods
Linguistics +6 = +1 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill
Perception +21 = +10 ranks, +0 Wis, +3 class skill, +8 extra mods
Perform (act) +20 = +13 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Perform (sing) +21 = +14 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Perform (string) +20 = +13 ranks, +4 Cha, +3 class skill
Sense Motive +0 = +0 ranks, +0 Wis
Sleight of Hand +2 = +0 ranks, +2 Dex
Stealth +2 = +0 ranks, +2 Dex
Swim +3 = +0 ranks, +1 Str, +2 extra mods
Use Magic Device +4 = +0 ranks, +4 Cha
Don't forget that his detective archetype removes bardic knowledge (so remove it from the SQ line) and replaces it with eye for detail which gives bonuses in other skills. Even after you do this, however, his skills are still a nightmare and erroneous.
EDIT: Also worth mentioning is he has a magic item, pipes of sounding, but no ranks in Perform (wind instruments) to use it.
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Victus Carrazinion p. 62
skill points = 60 = 48 class + 12 human
used = 60i get disguise of +6 instead of +3
Bluff +14 = +8 ranks, +1 Cha, +5 extra mods
Diplomacy +20 = +12 ranks, +1 Cha, +3 class skill, +4 extra mods
Disguise +6 = +0 ranks, +1 Cha, +5 extra mods
Intimidate +9 = +6 ranks, +1 Cha, +2 extra mods
Knowledge (history) +9 = +4 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (nobility) +11 = +6 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (planes) +11 = +6 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill
Knowledge (religion) +17 = +12 ranks, +2 Int, +3 class skill
Perception +7 = +0 ranks, +5 Wis, +2 extra mods
Sense Motive +16 = +6 ranks, +5 Wis, +3 class skill, +2 extra mods
Skills come out fine for me. Mine are exactly like yours but Disguise is at +3 for me:
Disguise +3 = 0 ranks + 1(Cha) + 2(feat)
What's really bizarre are his hit points. They don't make any sense at all (even if you add up what's presented in the stat block, 12d8+22 =/= 73). First of all, he's got a -1 Con mod, and seeing as how he didn't spend any favored class bonus points in skill points (or, presumably, a racial bonus), putting them into hp would cancel out the penalty resulting in an hp line that reads like:
"hp 57 (12d8)"
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Mierela Tsilda p. 49
two Dex AC mods, the +4 Dex I can't find a reason for it so AC seems to be off by 4.
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skill points = 56 = 42 class + 14 human
used = 514 unused points
Fly isn't +9 ,if I a 1 rank then it would be +4 since it is a class skill for sorcerer
Bluff +15 = +6 ranks, +6 Cha, +3 class skill
Diplomacy +15 = +6 ranks, +6 Cha, +3 class skill
Fly +8 = +0 ranks, +1 Dex, +7 extra mods
Knowledge (arcana) +15 = +11 ranks, +1 Int, +3 class skill
Linguistics +2 = +1 ranks, +1 Int
Perception +5 = +4 ranks, +1 Wis
Perform (dance) +15 = +6 ranks, +6 Cha, +3 class skill
Spellcraft +15 = +11 ranks, +1 Int, +3 class skill
Use Magic Device +15 = +6 ranks, +6 Cha, +3 class skill
I assume the first "+4 Dex" in the AC mods was supposed to be +4 armor, as this book has an (admittedly aberrant) pattern of assuming these mages have cast mage armor already. The flat-footed AC mod also suggests this.
Skills come out fine for me. Fly is +9 because the stat block isn't assuming fly has already been cast:
Fly +9 = 5 ranks + 3(class) + 1(Dex)
When she does cast fly, her Fly skill bonus will shoot up to +20:
Fly +20 = 5 ranks + 3(class) + 1(Dex) + 7(half CL) + 4(maneuverability)
I do see a couple more errors for this character.
1) She's missing a language. She's Varisian, so she'd start with Common and Varisian, +1 language for her Int, and +1 language for her rank in Linguistics.
2) Her CL and concentration bonus for her bloodline spell-like abilities is wrong. The bonus to existing spell-casting awarded by her prestige class only applies to spells, not the spell-like abilities of her bloodline. Therefore, it should say "(CL 7th; concentration +13)"