Kenneth.T.Cole |
Jerall Toi wrote:
Phlebotomist’s Gloves
The name is immediately an issue to me. Phlebotomist is not a word you would hear in a fantasy campain world. It's very scientific.
"Phlebototurgist" or "Phlebotomancer" would have been a better choices. They are still high-brow, but imply magic rather than science.At first I thought it would be a healing magical item, but then it became one that increases bleeding.
They're certainly a gruesome pair of gloves. The powers don't strike me as that useful, but I'm sure they have a niche. Must have been gruesome enough for the judges.
I would have liked to see more benefits from touching a bloody victim or even giving them your own blood.
Congrats and good luck in the next round.
Ken
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