Very good finish! Can't wait to start getting these books.
Nicejob. I am loving this weekly fiction!
As am I. Wednesday just used to be another day during the week, now its got a lot more meaning. :)
I'd love to see more stories about the many wars that have occurred or that are occurring in Golarion. It's a great opportunity to see the politics and cultures clash ... and of course to lop off more hobgoblin heads!
Agreed! The Oath Wars especially seem like a great opportunity to show conflict between some of the region's major religions, as well as between the Humanists of Rahadoum toward the end of the war.
I would really love to see these two return, certainly I would purchase a full Pathfinder Tales novel based on them if given the opportunity.
I really do love the idea of throwing an Eagle Knight and Hellknight together.. it's almost the ultimate fantasy buddy cop scenario... now if only they had a monkey.
I would really love to see these two return, certainly I would purchase a full Pathfinder Tales novel based on them if given the opportunity.
Me too... oh wait, I don't think I count do I.
I really do love the idea of throwing an Eagle Knight and Hellknight together.. it's almost the ultimate fantasy buddy cop scenario... now if only they had a monkey.
Unfortunately, I couldn't find any excuse to include a monkey, but who knows what the future might hold.
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I would really love to see these two return, certainly I would purchase a full Pathfinder Tales novel based on them if given the opportunity.Me too... oh wait, I don't think I count do I.
I really do love the idea of throwing an Eagle Knight and Hellknight together.. it's almost the ultimate fantasy buddy cop scenario... now if only they had a monkey.Unfortunately, I couldn't find any excuse to include a monkey, but who knows what the future might hold.
Not a monkey. A goblin. :)
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Not a monkey. A goblin. :)I would really love to see these two return, certainly I would purchase a full Pathfinder Tales novel based on them if given the opportunity.Me too... oh wait, I don't think I count do I.
I really do love the idea of throwing an Eagle Knight and Hellknight together.. it's almost the ultimate fantasy buddy cop scenario... now if only they had a monkey.Unfortunately, I couldn't find any excuse to include a monkey, but who knows what the future might hold.
A goblin played by Joe Pesci.
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A goblin played by Joe Pesci.Not a monkey. A goblin. :)I would really love to see these two return, certainly I would purchase a full Pathfinder Tales novel based on them if given the opportunity.Me too... oh wait, I don't think I count do I.
I really do love the idea of throwing an Eagle Knight and Hellknight together.. it's almost the ultimate fantasy buddy cop scenario... now if only they had a monkey.Unfortunately, I couldn't find any excuse to include a monkey, but who knows what the future might hold.
Why would you get a kobold to play a goblin?
personally i see it as our boys getting ambushed in the mwangi expanse and having to escape their captors with the help of a fellow prisoner, who happens to be a sentient ape rogue...
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Very well done :) That opening chapter was especially thrilling and had a wonderful cliffhanger! One element I found particularly pleasing was the way you played with the title's foreshadowing, presenting the opportunity to fulfill its promise only to find a credible way of bypassing doing so just one more time.
As for the characters, I had a hard time getting into Kal but I really enjoyed Tiberion incredibly. Even though the story is written moreover in Kal's voice, Tiberion was the one I could hear talking when I read his dialogue. You did an excellent job with both characters though and I'd love to see the continued adventures of either one (better yet, both).
Incidentally, one reason I may have gravitated his way could simply be that everytime I saw Kal's name I couldn't help but think of Kael from "Willow" which, of course, instantly gives me a double dose of dark knights. Great stuff and I hope to see more of you as I read through these tales. Cheers!
PS- If you really want to have a monkey in the plot, maybe you should have an eccentric druid join their party ;)