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Reviewed here, on DTRPG and sent to GMS magazine. Cheers!
Thanks for the review Endzeitgeist.
You wouldn't happen to have a list of editing problems for me, we worked this text a number of times including uploading a new copy last night with some more minor fixes.
- Mark
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I unfortunately didn't make a list and only tracked the number of glitches I found. I'll try to look through the pdf again as soon as I can, but things are rather busy on my end, so that might take some time.
One layout-peculiarity I recall from the top of my head was that there's no colon between the headers of the settlement entries like "Relationship with the outside world" and the flavor-text, which might be irritating when printed out in b/w. Hope that helps!
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One layout-peculiarity I recall from the top of my head was that there's no colon between the headers of the settlement entries like "Relationship with the outside world" and the flavor-text, which might be irritating when printed out in b/w. Hope that helps!
That is an intentional peculiarity. I believe the colons were in and I scrapped them. I've felt very over-coloned lately. I did not consider people printing it out for use because its a digital format and not hugely long.
Something I may need to reconsider now that you mention it.
Liz Courts
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PDF has been updated to correct a number of minor typographical and layout errors.
