Story, interesting romp to the Green Market.
Setting really a market, a custom map for a big market. A big market that wont fit on a flip mat, also there is a flip mat made by paizo of a market.
Role play, average. Telemayne is the star of this scenarios RP.
Combat, the second combat really is Awesome. Very unique, the first was standard kill the goons. I haven't seen the optional ran. Then the Final.
The final encounter, this could of been better on in many aspects.
First of Ethereal problems, problems and more problems, then dismissal as well as Ethereal and insubstantial confound each other talk about a headache. My biggest complaint is the Fire Elemental's, why are they there. How are the eternally loyal. How can Galdron even speak to them. Lastly how did they end up ethereal if it was voluntary why did they stay they are fire elementals that like to burn stuff...
A dramatic approach with telekinesis and the klar's and a ceremony could of been used, or at least Galdron could use Telekinesis to toss Ms. Foxglove around.
Suitability, I wouldn't recommend bring this out of PFS. If you do expect to make a couple changes.
Story 3/5
Setting 2/5
Role-play-ability 3/5
Combat 2/5
Suitability 3/5