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Daniel,

I really like your monster, not going say much about your execution skills, it is obvious you are a superstar there and the judges agree as well...

not so sure about the Laru stats as i am not an expert there but ill say this otherwise...it is the kinda monster you would put in either a one-off horror adventure or a side-quests, something to give the players a bit of a mystery chase or time-out in a campaign...basically it is an easy monster for any GM to build a short plot around a small village in the middle of nowhere with a haunted inn perhaps...

you will get my vote this round too...why? i like how and what you write and i want to see your encounter...i am upping the ante here, Daniel, so dont dissappoint me if you get through the next round...

oh and a bit of cliche, if i had money, i would make a Hollywood movie called "The Laru", would be a great horror flick!!

i am not an expert on words of power but i'll say this, as far flavour text goes, your entry comes on top of others, certainly one to keep an eye out in the next round..

Looking at Neil's entries from the vary beginning, i like Neil's shround of old souls, and that stood out with a bang from all the other entries
The enlightened Kingdom Of Vraimaire was sinister, though not my favourite, just won my liking.
The murderous midwife, well the first thought was OMG, perfect horror scenario, ideal for a low level city campaign. It would have been perfect for a pilot campaign and i loved it.

and then came The Thematically Link Monsters. Honestly, I had to read the entry a number of times, to try and comprehend what monster Neil was trying to potray. Suffice to say, i love the Haemogoblins, the name Haemogoblin and the blood Haemoglobin is nice blend for one. Campaign names should be catchy and at time with a tint of humours. As for the creatures itself, bloodlusting creatures are always welcome in any campaign, but instead of having a random monster encounter with such creatures, an addition of the Blood Decrier (i.e. the captain) and the Hameglobins (i.e. the soldiers) goes nicely.
So here's my evil thought, if i want to "write-off" my party members, hire a mercenary, well i think i know who to hire. "Yes, please dont just kill them, i want them to taste the horror of messing with me"

PS: I hope to see Neil in the next round. The way Neil narate his text is like reading a storybook, holding your attention, and am surely hoping to read your encounter. Good luck Neil!!