Unlike the other two dudes who posted before me, I actually had an account here before moseying on over to congratulate you. See, I had submitted something for this competition... and realized a few days later I had put forth a weapon, not a wondrous item.
No surprises that I'm the one playing Gimble at DnDOG then.
I'm afraid I don't really have any constructive criticism to say about your item, so I'll just leave you with that I think it's cool and that we're behind you! Looking forward to see watcha do in the next round!
~~~Lushmoss, Gimble player.