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VK Mk-Z wrote:
Finished my character! (I think)
Hoping miteke or someone else would check out my character and approve it.
His name is Anigast he is my second character listed (my first one is a bust and a WIP so I'm using Anigast for now).
You can check my profile for his background. It is not my main concern for now but it will be appreciated if you would criticize it for me!
I gave it a quick skim and the only thing I noticed is you actually get 2 background traits, it looks like you've only chosen one.
Besides that I think it checks out! Granted I'm not a GM though, just a player giving it a look.
I agree; aside from only having one trait, it looks like your character is just fine.
On a different note, if I may give some advice, putting everything into Strength and Constitution raises an eyebrow.
Don't feel you have to change your character at all though, it's just a suggestion. =)