I just got finished reading it. GREAT adventure!!! I thought the content and pace was amazing, good story telling all in all. I even truly enjoyed reading it as a GM, as it read a bit more like a novel to me than just an adventure/module/what have you...
The only negative I could possibly throw (and watch it not stick) is that the work needs better editing. There were plenty of examples of "the the" or words blatantly being substituted as if you meant to say our and typed are. Given the lean nature of the company at it's current stage in life, who cares!!! Give me more content like this and I'll hang my Grammar Nazi(tm) Hat on the wall for good when it comes to Fire Mountain Games!
You simply must plunk down the ten clams for this!
