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Neil Spicer wrote: Okay. Here's some hype. And, to add some fuel to that fire, it appears I've got room for one more player with an extra pregen PC if anyone's interested. Anyone who reads this posting can sound off in the thread above, expressing interest in the game. Rather than first-come, first-serve, I'll go with the same method as last year. Do your best to convince me you should be the one I add to the game...and you just might make it in. What is the etiquette for dropping something else for this? I had this as a 4, but did not get it in the lottery. I did get a 2, which is full also (20 of 20) and would hate to keep someone out if I did switch. Before I make a case for getting in, can someone help a newbie out now that trading is closed? I was trying to build this helmet/mask but my cos-fu failed me. I might come up with something simpler if I can get it done in the next three days :) I am going to need the weekend to fully come up with the backstory, but I wanted get some discussion going or at least throw out some details for those of you who have signed up. Choose a monster with CR of 4, 5, 6.
I had an instructor tell me that you can not play tennis without a net. He was talking about poetry of course, free form taking the craft out of the art. For this reason I was thinking to limit the choices of class. This is a game however. The number one rule is FUN. If you think this will ruin your fun please speak up!
Kyle Baird wrote:
Thanks Kyle, I sent an e-mail last week. If you dinnae get it can you send tips to me at scottajanke at gmail dot well you know the rest :) Marc Radle wrote:
+1 Also, how do I know what level the event I signed up for is?My players were pretty upset at the financial limits on farshore. They did focus on that aspect quite a bit, even though I never said more than to increase Farshore's productivity work on X. Their preparations in the outpost led to massive amounts of fabricate spells, cutting all the scripted fortifications to a day and half. After that I pretty much just ignored the points myself until the end. Oddly they planned to go from point C to point Z then to point A but as they actually did it pretty much followed the order the adventure was printed in. Vanthus got his shadowpearl off, but the mage was readying a globe of invulnerability in case the barbarian got into too much trouble. I let him make a reflex to change the target of the globe. A miles worth of madness contained in a tiny force sphere with only Vanthus for company. gave an A- on that one :) EDIT: I really should read the OP more often, you are probably already done with this adventure. Vic Wertz wrote:
Thanks Vic. EDIT: Oh and thanks (to you or whomever) for breaking the schedule into tabs for the different days. I was really struggling to recognize the days when I was scrolling back and forth :) Majuba wrote:
Having five hour events overlap each other does. Maybe that is the way it has to be to fit everything in in three days. Both my volunteer slots start at 8 am, and end at 1:00. The next slot of games starts at 12:00 (many of my 4s :) so I could not sign up for any of them. Because of the banquet on Saturday and the official end in the afternoon on Sunday, this only left me two gaming slots to even try for. Fortunately, there are a lot of seminars I wanted to attend at these times :) Possible options?
Wow only two-ish weeks to go! Doug Benson wrote:
I remember a week or so before being said, but I cannae find it now. Since the lottery does not close until next monday, and we are a go two weeks after that. Sorry that is only a half an answer :) Matt Goodall wrote: There is good work is happening here. Keep it up guys. Keep practicing and then find that golden idea for the next competition. Good luck. Thanks :) Toxin Trapper Bottle
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Aura faint conjuration; CL3rd
Slot --; Price ZZ gp; Weight -- Description A thin, slimy material coats the inside of this dark green bottle. The glass stopper looks like a mushroom with spots of white on a long red cap.
Hyrum Savage wrote:
The non-PFS game I am running does not show up on my schedule. Also it is scheduled until 1 (as Deidre pointed out) though the next set of things (including lots of my 4's :) begin at 12. Is that correct? I really will have room for a 5 hour lunch :) Should I sign up or not for any of the cool stuff starting at noon? Ask A RPGSupersuccubus wrote: ...any practical value to a succubus...(and have other means such as their inherent ability to jaunt into the ethereal to escape if swallowed)... Challenge accepted! Disclaimer: though not until June, as the current assignment is well under way :)Oh and thanks for the critique (and to SeanByrn too :) RonarsCorruption wrote:
Nice Ronars! Dorian Gray was my first thought, even though that would be a very complicated item. This is one aspect of that, and therefore much more manageable. Why an assassin's portrait? Presumeably to study the target. This is a complication though. The target would have to want a painting of the assassin. Or be tricked into the musuem where such a painting is displayed. or enter an established pre-determined by the assassin or maybe in the BBEG's waiting room (at which point I wonder why have the painting?) Mechanically I think this works, I think it is not an item most adventures can use (plot device is what I think SKR's rules called it. Baron: Honey? did you replace granpapa's portrait? Baroness: No dear. That red mantis outfit is much, much too garish for the throne-room. Though I do love they way his eyes follow you around the room. How are negotions going with the merchant's guild? An early Nick Logue PF module featured lots of creepy/animated art that might be worth locating for fine tuning. I can see it working as one card in a CCG (or even a standard deck of cards) or some other way to get into a lot of different places. Most likely I think this would work as a minor word of recall, presuming I had my picture painted in front of a rack of cure serious wounds potions (depending on how you work the magic concern earlier :). Or as a teleporter who wanted to study any number of locations without having to get their themselves could send his portait on a world tour. An art theif could use it to case a joint, but he would have to get a Michaelangelo to make the painting for him. A little plot device-ish, but a nice idea working here. O:) Title: Bestiary Bash 2
RonarsCorruption wrote:
Agreed. Swallow hole was a lot more common in 3.5, which is where the idea started. I figure it works for an exercise though :) Rewrite after taking your helpful suggestions into account: Spoiler: (as far as it being a one time then resell item, keep in mind that 'any blade' includes the holy avenger you were already weilding :)
Gizzard’s Bane Scabbard Aura moderate enchantment, transmutation; CL 8th Slot --; Price 23,040 gp; Weight 2 lbs. Description A monstrous face carved in the strangely polished stone scabbard appears to swallow whatever blade is placed inside. The scabbard resizes to fit any small, medium, or large bladed weapon. Attuning a weapon requires carrying it in the gizzard’s bane scabbard for 24 hours. To activate the scabbard, the attuned weapon must strike a creature one size larger than the wearer. When activated (free action as part of the attack) the scabbard whispers commands to the creature. If the creature fails a Will save (DC 18) it must attack the wearer with a series of specific attacks. First it must bite the wearer, then start a grab, and finally it must swallow the wearer. These actions take their normal time and the creature is unable to attempt any other action until successful. If the creature does not have the swallow whole ability, the domination ends after the bite attack (if it has no bite attack the save automatically succeeds.) While swallowed in this manner, the wearer gains resistance to acid 10 and DR 10/adamantine. The swallowed wearer may also wield the attuned weapon as if it were light. The scabbard only recognizes size, it cannot determine if a creature has a bite attack or the grab or swallow whole abilities. The scabbard can only affect one creature per day. Construction
did I mention my weekend is S, M? :) Gizzard Stone Scabbard
Construction
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swallow hole is not as popular in PF as it was in 3.5. Since this is based on a legacy weapon for my anti-dragon character I do not think it is strong enough for superstar. go ahead hit me :) Clark Peterson wrote: Nice to see you guys tuning up for 2012 :) :) RonarsCorruption wrote: Time to get working on next month's item.:) Seabyrn wrote: just a nit - 'made' is still passive in your correction (which is nevertheless an improvement). I think the improvement largely stems from putting 'this cape' adjacent to 'glistens' which strengthens the sentence. hehe, good call. :) in which case this silk cape glistens... O:) RonarsCorruption wrote:
Formatting. Typically made of silk, this cape glistens... (suggestion to correct active voice). simple torch effect, nice. Ten minutes a day is much more than most parties will spend in combat, meaning this is under-priced at 7k. If it functions only once per day, and that happens to be ten minutes, that is different, but it is unclear on time being consecutive. Simple piece of fabric or fine silk? define 'distraction' mechanically (dazed? blinded? fatigued? AC bonus? other?) what type of save bonus? can't be flanked is general, but you might be able to say adjacent enemies do not threaten a square except on their action, but that might be making it more complicated too. Last line should be sooner, and could be shortened to strengthen it :) My internal designer wants to add a laser-beam attack :) Nice job Ronars, :) I will have one ready by this weekend. RonarsCorruption wrote:
Of course if the one thing is flavor, you can probably work in a few other effects, as a certain set of dryad leaves has shown. :) Neil Spicer wrote:
Thanks Neil, that means a lot. For what it is worth, the fact that you remembered my item from 2009 in one of these threads also means a lot. :) (Cerberus Collar :) I really look forward to a superstar workshop at paizocon (and would offer to run one myself if I had any sort of credentials to support it :) Neil Spicer wrote:
Interestingly this effect was tweaked from something else when one of my proof-readers commented that it was like Batman getting out of a scrape... :) Neil Spicer wrote:
A nat 1 is a miss right? I roll a lot of those.... :) Thanks as always Neil. True Superstar work! I originally based this on fly (OK originally it used the first line of the fireball spell :). Trying to cover all various skill checks for both the wasp and the user, maneuverability ratings, attacks of opportunities, etc., while NOT repeating core text was very confusing. In simplifying it I switched to dimdoor. Oops :). Neil Spicer wrote:
Hey Neil, I waited until some of the noise died down here, so if I missed you that is OK. If not I do not need an in-depth review but would appreciate the "summary" and "advice" bits you've offered. Also if you could expand the above bolded I would appreciate it. Or I will see you at PaizoCon :) Thanks! Well as John pointed out the banner is gone and Sam has had a while to bask in his well-earned glory (congrats again :). You may remember DankeSean's recommendation to write one good item every month so we will have some awesome stuff for next year. It worked too, carrying him to Top Four and he is one of the few people to have Top 32 twice (congrats again :) So are you ready to put some items out for practice and critique? One a month is not so bad (spend the rest of the month writing PFS submissions :). Spoiler:
If you do not want to tip your hand we could stay away from wondrous items--weapons, armor, rings, and potions are fair game, but all the other rules apply.
In response to critiques, try rewriting the item addressing questions and concerns. Every good writer is first a re-writer first :)
James I really appreciated your and Chris's feedback. Thanks so much for that! I think you had a lot more people at the seminar than actually turned in stories which I think even those not getting personal critique appreciated. Workshop are favored for me over seminars, but I will attend every writing workshop and seminar that is offered. With so many authors I hope that means quite a few! Eric Hindley wrote:
Thanks Eric, I was hoping to see some of the top 32's inspiration and process. That you have done it twice is particularly important. Thanks John too, but I will have to read it when I have more time.
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thanks for the warning :) I think the line from the FAQ for each round's rules might be appropriate here: We at Paizo do not see these two as opposites (to paraphrase :) That said in the one shot modules the niche is a good way to go from a marketing stand-point. It might draw in some people who otherwise do not buy stuff and a lot of RPGSS is about the marketability of the company. (I say a lot, but I only surmise that from the 'no child endangerment' and 'no vomit jokes' in SKR's advice threads :) But in a proposal (as round 5 actually is) niche is not the way to go. Paizo needs X type of adventures here and Y type adventures there. Unless you know if they are here or there you will want to appeal to the broadest audience available. In the editing process, they will then (hopefully?) tell you which direction this needs to go for the finished project. I will now have to compare Christine's, Neil's and Matt's proposals compared to the final products and see if this theory holds any water :) (and plan my next entry approprately :) Way back in January I took the 32 and played my own RPGSS Fantasy. Only one person that I predicted making it to top 4 made it to top four, so I should vote for Sean. (congratulations Sean :)
but I made all those predictions before reading the final entries. Based on the entries for round four... Sean: cliché joker location, hard to predict, players could advance too much before BBEG or not enough. great hooks, good story.
So a tight race between Dankesean and Scipion, but my vote went to Cody. Standback wrote:
+1 I think some submissions lost my vote in the past because I could never work something so gonzo into my group. all these I think have place at my table. And +1 they do seem much tighter submissions. With three points each for writing, fun to play, and understandable/cool map (playability being the tie breaker :) I had two ties for first and two for second. Fortunately that means I had an easy vote this round. :) Zeitlen, The Black Mirror
Congratulations to all 8!
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