Round two! I hope my critique is useful, even if I'm not Clark. ;)
Gloves of the Magi
Yeah, it's hard not to draw the connection to staff of the magi with a name like that.
Your descriptive sentance starts out fine, but ends really clunkily. Remove that last bit after the last comma, and I think it flows better. After that, the contents flow rather well, too, so it's a bad opening line. I do like the whole magus touch spells, carry over effect thing. It's a neat ability, and it's written well - except that you don't clairify what happens with non-damage spells. That's a major hole.
Still, I do like it - your attempt to pluralize magus killed it, though.
Thanks for the feedback. I'm definitely not going to make a naming mistake like that again, even if it was justified by the book clearly stating that magi is the plural of magus. I've since revised my item, and hope to get further feedback on the theory that, if I can produce a worthy item once, I can do it again.