After giving it more thoughts, I have decided to skip my application for this game. Even though I had a good idea for my character, I just don't "feel it", and playing a character I don't "feel" has led me to poor RP in the past which I prefer to avoid repeating. Sorry. Really pains me because I am sure that this will be a great group.
Massive in size, powerful in nature, Tava is accustomed to being quite and unseen. Although female, only her tribe knows it. She lets everyone else assume she is a male, it's just simpler that way, for now. Her background is rather simple, the tribe is her family, the dark is her home. She has lived below for as long as she can remember, only once or twice has she view the above and daylight. She has the power of speech, but it so unused, it will take quite some time for her to speak. Even then, single words and gestures are her preferred method of communication. She tends to be a protector, looking after those weaker or less skilled than she is. That could be the entire soft skins of the party!
I'd really like to see it fluffed out a little more if possible. Maybe add in a couple of stories about her life, and a few details to make it more unique to Eberron.
I want you to think on what made you decide to leave Kra and your fellow Night Stalkers. Were you separated by accident or by choice? Were you captured and taken away from your group, or had you already left your group before being captured? What did you think of the encounter that your group had with those who came into this area and Kra let sleep in safety with your group?
Think about adding some of that into your background.
You know who your enemy is, you know who captured you. It's the Stone Keepers that your group ambushed and tracked to the old building that the Glass Tower fell into. They're the ones with the dogs that disappear. They've caused the Night Stalkers a lot of problems in the past.
Male (Channel 4/4 2d6 DC 12 will), (Liberation 3/3 rounds), (Touch of Good 8/8) Human Cleric 3 (Hp 24/24),(AC20, T13, FF18),(Saves F4, R2, W8), Init 2, Percept 8
Well, reading the source book might be a bit difficult right now.
My copy of the ebberon book happens to be missing. :(
will have to wiki the fallen, and sharn to get a feel.
Still reviewing. I had planned on Tava knowing as little as possible, so as to enjoy spending time in the light and learning about it.
But
Some background:
Tava remembers a place of light and green when she was small. Then a long travel to a city in the sky, it looked like it touched the clouds. Mother left during the trip, Tava knows now she died some how. Father was with her for some time, then he found another Mama for Tava. She was a human, not an orc like Tava and Papa.
There was some bad stuff happening, a war, Papa got a job going to war. He was good at it, very strong, very tough. He would leave and then come back, again and again and again. Then one day, he never came back.
Tava's new mama left her soon after that, where she went Tava never found out. Like the rain and sewage, Tava drifted deeper and deeper into the depths of the city until she found her way to her new family.
They fed her and taught her how to live, how to be silent, and how to hunt. After a time, that became all she was.
But still, she would wander and explore, often to the exasperation of her tribe mates.
That was how she was captured, wandering far from home, exploring a new place.
Male (Channel 4/4 2d6 DC 12 will), (Liberation 3/3 rounds), (Touch of Good 8/8) Human Cleric 3 (Hp 24/24),(AC20, T13, FF18),(Saves F4, R2, W8), Init 2, Percept 8
I knew I missed something, would you mind if I added a dagger to my list of items ?
Granted, it isn't in my possession right now, but I had thought I had one.
I'd rather at this point you wait until you were back in town and purchased one that way, or scavenged one in loot or something. I'm sorry but to be fair you had plenty of time to get your character together, lol.
Will be out most of the day with friends and watching Battle of Five Armies. Please just have Silian continue to slash at his foe when/if my turn comes around by then! Thanks!
Male (Channel 4/4 2d6 DC 12 will), (Liberation 3/3 rounds), (Touch of Good 8/8) Human Cleric 3 (Hp 24/24),(AC20, T13, FF18),(Saves F4, R2, W8), Init 2, Percept 8
Starting Saturday, I will be haphazard for being online.
I will be travelling, so might not have net access.
Please DMPC me if I haven’t posted within 24 hours.
This condition will persist until early Jan.